第二节: 读后续写（满分25分）
One possible version:
Paragraph 1:
That evening, Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper. She wrote “To Bobby, From Santa Claus” on it, after which she drove me over to Bobby Decker’s house, explaining I was officially one of Santa’s helpers. Grandma parked down the street form Bobby’s house, and I took a deep breath, and dashed for his front door. Seeing no other people notice us, I put the Christmas present down, pounded his doorbell and then Grandma and I hid in the car.
Paragraph 2:
Grandma and I waited breathlessly for Bobby Decker’s front door to open and finally it opened. Out went Bobby Decker. Seeing the coat in the bag, he looked very astonished and then called his mother to go out. After hearing them say “Thanks” to Santa Claus, I felt very proud of what I had done. At that time I decided to be Santa’s helper for ever. It was on that night that I realized the truth that he who has no Christmas in his heart will never find Christmas under a tree.
读后续写（满分25分）
一、评分原则
1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
2.评分时，先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3.词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分。
4.评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：
（1）与所给短文的开头语衔接程度；
（2）内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况；
（3）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；
（4）上下文的连贯性。
5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
6.如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
档次 描述
第五档
（21-25） 与所给短文融合度高，与所提供的各段落开头语衔接合理。
内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。
所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意思表达。
有效地使用了词语间的连接成分，所续写短文结构紧凑。
第四档
（16-20） 与所给短文融合度较高，与所提供的各段落开头语衔接较为合理。
内容比较丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。
所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但不影响意思表达。
比较有效地使用了词语间的连接成分，所续写短文结构紧凑。
第三档
（11-15） 与所给短文关系较为密切，与所提供的各段落开头语衔接有一定程度衔接。
写出了若干有关内容，应用了4个以上短文中标出的关键词语。
应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求，虽有一些错误，但不影响意思表达。
应用简单的句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
第二档
（6-10） 与所给短文关系有一定关系，与所提供的各段落开头语衔接有一定程度衔接。
写出了一些有关内容，应用了3个以上短文中标出的关键词语。
语法结构单调，词汇项目有限，有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响意思了的表达。
较少使用了句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性。
第一档
（1-5） 与所给短文和开头语衔接较差。
产出内容太少，很少使用短文中标出的关键词语。
语法结构单调，词汇项目很有限，有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误，严重影响意思了的表达。
缺乏句间的连接成分，全文内容不连贯。
0分 白卷，内容太少无法评判或所写内容与所提供内容无关。
听力原文：
Text 1
M: Why don’t you just tell Mr. Johnson how you feel?
W: I’m just so angry that I don’t know what I would say to him!
Text 2
W: It’ s amazing that you got such a high bonus.
M: Well, there’s no such thing as a free lunch. Bonuses depend on company performance, and I worked overtime almost every day.
Text 3
M: Diana, I think Friday is a bad night for a party. Everybody is always too tired to stay up all night.
W: All right. Let’s make it one day later.
Text 4
M: For the last time, please accept my offer! I know exactly what these things are supposed to cost. I’ve been in this business for over twelve years, so I know what I’m talking about.
W: Sir, perhaps you haven’t heard me clearly. We only sell items at fixed prices here. All prices are final, I’m afraid.
Text 5
W: Honey, I’m going downtown. Do we need anything from the grocery store?
M: We need some steaks and some corn for the barbecue tonight. And maybe you could get some stamps afterwards.
W: All right.
Text 6
W: Hello, young man. Be a good boy and help an old woman cross the street, would you?
M: Of course, madam. I’d be glad to.
W: Thank you so much. I’m afraid these legs don’t move as fast as they used to!
M: Well, I think you’re looking very healthy. By the way, where are you going today?
W: Oh, I’m just going to the drugstore over there. I’ve got to pick up some medication for my husband.
M: Well, I will wait for you outside the drugstore and help you back across the street whenever you’re ready.
W: You are so kind!
Text 7
M: Have you seen Dan the Bear?
W: No, I haven’t.
M: Oh, well, he’s supposed to go onstage in 10 minutes. All the kids are waiting for him to sing.
W: Hmm... Maybe he’s out by the fish tank giving away balloons and talking with the dolphin trainer. Did you check there?
M: Yes, I did, but they said they hadn’t seen him. If you see him, please tell him that he’s needed on the small stage as soon as possible.
W: Okay, I’ll send a radio message out to all of the security officers and have them look for him. I’m sure he’s on his way right now.
M: Great. Thank you so much for your support. Will I see you at the bar after work tonight?
W: I think I’ll go there a bit later. I want to get a haircut and change clothes first.
M: Great. I’ll buy you a drink if you can get Dan the Bear onstage on time.
w. Okay, it’s a deal.
Text 8
M: Hey! Long time no see.
W: Hi! How are you? How was your weekend?
M: It was fantastic. I had so much fun. I wish it had been longer. How was yours?
W: Oh, you don’t want to hear about it. Anyway, what did you do that was so fantastic?
M: Well, I went snowboarding on Saturday, and I went to my grandparents’ house on Sunday.
W: How fun! It sounds like you were busy. I wish I had gone snowboarding. Maybe I’ll go this weekend. Aren’t you tired after your busy weekend?
M: A little, but it was a productive weekend, so I’m feeling okay. I had been planning to visit my grandparents for a long time, and I finally got some time to do it. Did you just stay in the dorm all weekend?
W: Well, I rented a bunch of DVDs and watched them all. That is why my eyes are swollen.
M: I can see that. Oh, let’ s hurry! Professor Don will be mad at us if we are late again!
Text 9
W: Hey there. I’m your neighbor. My name is Shirley.
M: Hi, Shirley. I’m Bob. It’s nice to meet you.
W: Nice to meet you, too.
M: Please come in.
W: Here is a little gift for your family. It’s a calendar with all the community events on it.
M: Thank you! I really appreciate it.
W: Since we are neighbors, if you need any help with anything, please feel free to ask me.
M: I will. Actually, I am worried about the security of this community because my house has been robbed twice before.
W: Oh don’t worry about that. There are security guards on duty 24 hours a day.
M: Really? That’s good. Are there any supermarkets in the neighborhood?
W: Of course. There is a Carrefour nearby. I’ll take you there sometime if you want.
M: Terrific!
W: By the way, there will be a party for all the new neighbors the day after tomorrow. I hope I will see you there.
M: I’ll be there.
W: Great. I’ve got to go. See you later!
M. OK. Come and visit anytime.
W: Thanks. I will!
Text 10
Deep Spring is an American college. It is an unusual college. It is located high in the mountains in California, not in a college town. The campus is a collection of old buildings with no beautiful classrooms. The only college-like thing about Deep Springs is its library. Students can use the 17000 books 24 hours a day. The library is never crowded because there are only 24 students at the college, and they are all male. There are only five professors. These teachers believe in the college, but they are not well-paid. In fact, they only get paid about 9000 dollars a year. The college gives teachers and students something more important than money —peace and quiet. There is no place like Deep Springs. Students are there to learn and they cannot run away from their problems because there is no place to run to. At most colleges, students can close their books and go to a film, or they can go out to restaurants or parties, but the students at Deep Springs have completely different activities. They can talk to each other or their teachers, or they can go out for a walk in the mountains, and that’s about it. Deep Springs is far from the world of restaurants and cinemas. There isn’t even one television set on campus.
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